The omen
They decide to meet once a month. Good things always come rare, he had said.
First month, they meet and both are shy and nervous. Second month, she goes off on an overseas trip. Third month, they do meet and this time its magic with neither wanting the moments to end. Fourth month, he gets stuck at work. Fifth month, he goes on a vacation. Sixth month, she falls sick. Seventh month, they plan their date to perfection until a curfew hits the city. Eighth month, they are finally together again.
"We had decided on meeting every month. Perhaps, this is a sign" she sighs as he stretches on her couch.
"Umm! We are probably jinxed. But we are together now" he smiles, holding her close.
And they forget their jinxes and omens and spend the togetherness relishing every instant. After all, good things came rare.
"Maybe we must not plan so well in advance next time" she smiles at her self-proclamation, as he leaves to pick his wife from her workplace. At the corner of the road, she sees her husband's silhouette parking the car in the garage.
First month, they meet and both are shy and nervous. Second month, she goes off on an overseas trip. Third month, they do meet and this time its magic with neither wanting the moments to end. Fourth month, he gets stuck at work. Fifth month, he goes on a vacation. Sixth month, she falls sick. Seventh month, they plan their date to perfection until a curfew hits the city. Eighth month, they are finally together again.
"We had decided on meeting every month. Perhaps, this is a sign" she sighs as he stretches on her couch.
"Umm! We are probably jinxed. But we are together now" he smiles, holding her close.
And they forget their jinxes and omens and spend the togetherness relishing every instant. After all, good things came rare.
"Maybe we must not plan so well in advance next time" she smiles at her self-proclamation, as he leaves to pick his wife from her workplace. At the corner of the road, she sees her husband's silhouette parking the car in the garage.
14 Comments:
You are getting most influenced and maxly promoting the saas bhi - "Pati Patni and woh" theme based serials!!
~pensive: Heh! Promoting?? Hardly...! Thats Ms. (Kk)Ekta Kapoor's forte!
And looks like I must write fiction more often to attract attention of some globetrotting busybees..:)
This should be the plot of next episode of Cheaters!
reminds me of 'The Blind Assasin' :)
~sinusoidally: Umm. I wish they were reading this and gave me a patent or something..:-)
~swathi: Haven't seen it. :-)
And long time no post!!
ahhhh.
you got me at the end!
and are there more parts?
pretty please!
:D
~megha: Wicked ppl, aren't we?..:)
Not a bad idea though. Maybe one of these soap opera kinds will recognise my talent sooner or later.
Whoa! Awesome! I hope the two met more often and their respective spouses didnt come to know. And everyone lived happily :)
Nothing like a modern day fairy tale to make one feel good!
Thanks :D
u left it open-ended. Can give the K-soaps a run for the money by pulling this. A quadrangle should be interesting! :)
Oooooh delicious! Liked the sign vs omen bit too. Very nice :)
Arty
please wake up from ur sumber and pick the tag...
~vijayeta: Modern day fairy tale, eh! Thats a perspective I never considered.. :)
~prashanth: Haha! The spouse swapping twist. Keep the ideas coming..
~megha: Thankoo!
~swathi: *gradually opening eyes and droopy again* Will get to the tag soon.
heyy :-), my second time on your page.. and what a revelation...:-)
Question is, must one worry when married good tam-brahm women start trying delicious nugget-like short-er episodal stories of infidelity?
:) hahaha... lovely tho' ! keep 'em coming.
~hip_prudester: Hehe! In that case, how will all the authors justify their works - infidelity or otherwise? Not that I call myself an author here. But its just a thought.
Or maybe some tam-bram married women are not so good after all..:-)
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